Meh zan [ MATURE TAG]

Name: Kitsuen [ Meaning Smoking. ]


Manifestation: Kitsuen is a woman standing at 5'8. She looks the age of 18, and has hair reaching her shoulders that is blue on the left side and black on the right side. Her eyes are crimson red and her lipstick is colored dark grey. Her breasts are E-cups and doesn't wear a top. Basically, her upper body is completely nude while below, she wears only socks below. Her entire body is exposed. Her skin is quite white. One would consider it to be vanilla white. Her nails are quite long and are painted blue with stars on it. She is very slender, yet doesn't seem anorexic. The woman appears to have fangs and a large booty as well.


Family: Smoke



Level: Bankai


Sealed Description: Kitsuen is a very thin blade and is painted black on the edges of the blade. The hilt has a tiny chain attached to it on the bottom. When it is bathed by the sunlight, it gleams like the morning star. (Can't believe that sounded so gay)

Shikai Description: Kitsuen disappears into a puff of smoke that can cover 3 and a half yards if all put together. By puff of smoke, it really is kind of like a cloud of smoke. Though, can be reduced to a mere puff with a blink of an eye. When Hunter wants to reform the blade, it is still the same.

Bankai Release Phrase (Optional) "Take 'em out, Kitsuen"


Bankai Description: Kitsuen now forms a huge creature of smoke that is the size of a Gillian. This creature of smoke releases smoke from his hands and mouth, but takes large quantities of reiatsu, therefore, can only be used for 15 posts. It can also disperse the creature made out of smoke and form a weird covering of smoke. The view is blocked by the smoke. Hunter still has however his blade.

Shikai Ability: Kitsuen can be controlled by the hand of Hunter, it's main ability is causing the enemy to bruise. Still, the cloud of smoke is too weak to actually cut the opponent, it can only cause bruises, but if Hunter focus on one point of the smoke, it will be able to break a bone or make the enemy's afflicted part numb for 4 posts. Hunter can reform his blade from smoke if needed. Kitsuen can be used as a smoke bomb. Causing smoke to appear a yard around the opponent, hunter shrouded, but his zanpakutou knows exactly where the opponent is as long as he/she is within the shroud of smoke. Hunter cannot produce more than the amount he already has. The cloud of smoke is around 3 and a half yards long.


Bankai Ability: His bankai is basically the same, except that Kitsuen can summon a large smoke beast using smoke though very hard to keep materialized. So, it is seldom ever used, but the cloud of smoke can now cover 1 mile. Not only causing bruising, it assures broken bones or the numbness. Not only that, it can turn Hunter into smoke when using smoke to block the opponent's view. This smoke can cover 19 yards around the opponent. Hunter can materialize himself anywhere within the shadow by turning into smoke and appearing behind his opponent.

Though wind would be very effective against smoke. If a strong use of wind from a wind element zan type attacks Hunter while materializing, it will take awhile to materialize again. In bankai, he can produce more of smoke, about a mile worth more, but it is exhausting. Now, if Hunter summoned the smoke giant, the 2 and a half mile of smoke would be cut down by a mile and a half. A yard lessens each post Hunter uses the smoke giant. The young shinigami will also not be able to produce more smoke.

Hunter can't however control the smoke that spreads to 2 and a half miles. In order to cause the bruising and broken bones, he has to pull back the smoke to him. If he were to pull back all, he would use too much energy, therefore, he only takes half a mile. But if he uses the smoke bomb mode, he cannot control it.


Inner World: It's inner world is in a cold deserted place. No life can be seen, and only one iceburg in sight. There, Hunter and Kitsuen will appear. The sky seems very dim, and the clouds in the water, but when it is in chaos, the iceburg sinks and the water creates a monsoon. Then, the clouds is able to be touched. Tigers will arise from the water, and sharks crash unto the water from the sky.

Zanpakutō Spirit Persona: Kitsuen can be very flirty, and is very loyal. She wants to please her master and does anything Hunter commands. Because she is his zanpakutou, they have the same mind. For example, Hunter is lonely and wants to do something [warning: for adults only ]

Spoiler:

she can materialize herself before him. The girl has the strange desire to always talk to her master everywhere, and hates it when she is not brought along with Hunter. In fact, she pouts whenever Hunter leaves her when going out. She punishes him by not materializing for a week or two. Though, she can also become quite merciless.

When fighting, she doesn't even talk with her master unless really needed. They have worked together long enough to anticipate each other. Therefore, she can really be ready for battle in an instant. Her chirpy personality is not to be underestimated. In an instant, she can turn that nice personality, to a nice way to roast you for dinner.



Techniques:

No techs for now


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I believe a bump is in order.

Hmm after much reading and thinking and all that jazz. Its been agreed that your Bankai needs some tweaking. As such you will have to reduce the area in which the smoke covers.
2 and a half miles is way too much at the moment, for such control. Even if some of it is only minimal at best.

Edited and Bump.

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